Sketch Saturday

So this was the first sketch I did for a possible second entry for a Twisted Fairytales contest on DA. The Fairytale I chose to warp for my second entry was Snow White. I wanted to make her a vampire with the seven dwarves as her 'familiars'. Then I browsed around DA for ref images and got ideas for a more imaginative composition and came up with a second sketch.
Whilst I do like the above, second sketch I don't think I'm going to take it any further. Well, not right now at least. The more I try to do to it, the more frustrated I get with it. Looks like I won't be making another entry for that contest. :/ Which sucks because I don't believe my first entry to be particularly strong, either; I would've liked to have made another image for the contest.

I think I'm gonna go draw something else now. These sketches are just pissing me off. :/ But I do like the bow I gave Snow White. XD These sketches have also highlighted the weaknesses in my style and just how much I can't draw. : [ So now I'm having an 'I-can't-draw-day' and feeling kinda shitty about it. *Sigh*

My first entry for the contest can be found here.
Edit as of 17.10.09: Here's what the finished product ended up looking like. WARNING! Tits! 8D